“ Write Me a Story ”
I love writing, whether typing on a computer or ink and paper. This week I struggled with single focal point, until I got my new pen. I love the beautiful scroll work and the the point of the nib and shape of the body. This week I was able to mix an old passion with a new.
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  • Ole Harestad Edited 4 years ago

    Great shot of a beautiful pen! You got the focus perfect!

    Great shot of a beautiful pen! You got the focus perfect!

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  • Deborah Seaman Edited 4 years ago

    Love the tonal shades of the paper going up the body of the pen. Adding more to the bottom of the shot might give the pen more breathing room, but either way, nice work.

    Love the tonal shades of the paper going up the body of the pen. Adding more to the bottom of the shot might give the pen more breathing room, but either way, nice work.

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  • Erin Bradley Edited 4 years ago

    Such good fortune to have two wonderful creative pursuits! I love your idea and composition. I agree with the other comments. I would also like to add that I like how… more

    Such good fortune to have two wonderful creative pursuits! I love your idea and composition. I agree with the other comments. I would also like to add that I like how the image is darker in the background which adds to the focus on the bib. Well done!

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  • taisey_photos Edited 4 years ago

    Love the Depth of Field. I agree with Distilled on having a little more room so the shadow isn't cut off, but I didn't notice it before I read that comment. love the… more

    Love the Depth of Field. I agree with Distilled on having a little more room so the shadow isn't cut off, but I didn't notice it before I read that comment. love the lined paper choice

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