“ Dawn ”
I went back to 2016 and week 52 which was Artist Choice. I think that Crystal Dahlman captured her daughter in high key perfectly. I am not sure mine does it justice. I tend to wait until the last minute with this project but it is important to me to submit something even if it misses.
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  • Erika Gerdsen Edited 2 years ago

    I quite like this portrait, Michael. Dawn has a very happy and relaxed smile.

    I quite like this portrait, Michael. Dawn has a very happy and relaxed smile.

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  • Diane Todd Edited 2 years ago

    It’s great that you have the eye… more

    It’s great that you have the eye contact

    Maybe decrease your exposure so the whites aren’t so white as it has lost some of the definition in her face

    A great attempt at portrait

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Regular Critique
Shred away! I feel no pain.
Please be extra sensitive with your critique
Not interested in critique but feel free to comment
Nikon D500 Nikon 35mm f/1.8 Recommended!
1/800 f/2.8 250 35

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#inspiredbyaframer #highkey

Genre/Technique

Black & White Portrait/Self-Portrait

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