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Katie Griffith Unfollow
“ Sealed ”
I love making wax seals and thought that a dripping wax seal stick would be a good fit for this week's prompt. Hand model, my sister! Not sure how I feel about the books in the background, but did the best I could with the space I had!
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  • David Naar Edited 4 years ago

    just thinking about the composition I would have tried to have the wax a little more to the left where it would not be competing with the bookcase. I would also tried to… more

    just thinking about the composition I would have tried to have the wax a little more to the left where it would not be competing with the bookcase. I would also tried to get the complete objet on the left into the frame. This would balance with the 2 objects on the right.

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  • Brian Jesteadt Edited 4 years ago

    Very cool Katie. A little more light bounced onto the foreground objects might be nice. Any white or shiny surface can bounce light. … more

    Very cool Katie. A little more light bounced onto the foreground objects might be nice. Any white or shiny surface can bounce light. 
    I think the wax is a very neat subject, and the books make a fun background, and are out of focus enough to not be too distracting, but a bed sheet could have easily given you a more “studio” style if you wanted. Excellent job!

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  • Stephen Mallon Edited 4 years ago

    You caught the dripping wax nicely. Don't worry about the background books as they are blurred enough not to grab attention. Well done.

    You caught the dripping wax nicely. Don't worry about the background books as they are blurred enough not to grab attention. Well done.

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