“ It the eyes for me ”
Everyone always tells me that they could get lost in my eyes. I find it hard to believe at times....I wanted to capture and see what everyone is talking about. In my eyes I see a world of struggle for someone who always wants to give love and support but struggles to get it in return.
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  • Jeremy West Edited 4 years ago

    I do think yours eyes make a good focal… more

    I do think yours eyes make a good focal point.

    The way the image splits your left eye is distracting. Would either crop it out entirely going for a symmetric split down the center of the face or expanding to include both eyes.

    Good job.

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  • David Giedrimas Edited 4 years ago

    Looks to be a beautiful 'eye', imagine many have gotten lost there. It can be really hard to get the desired effect with a self portrait or selfie...often takes a lot… more

    Looks to be a beautiful 'eye', imagine many have gotten lost there. It can be really hard to get the desired effect with a self portrait or selfie...often takes a lot of practice or a bit of luck. This one being a little out of focus and the way you are cropped here, almost like you are peaking from halfway out of frame, gives the image that 'deer in the headlights' look...to me anyway. But did make me stop and take a closer look which is something a good image should do. Keep up the good work!

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