“ self-portrait ”
this took me way too much time! i'm usually behind the camera - so i didn't know how i wanted this to look....ended up with old time feel
was shot in my basement with not much light
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  • Barbara Pollard Edited 4 years ago

    I like the warm brown tones and soft focus of this image. Also the fact that you are not looking at the camera - kind of dreamy… more

    I like the warm brown tones and soft focus of this image. Also the fact that you are not looking at the camera - kind of dreamy look.

    I found the two hands a little distracting. Maybe show just one hand or perhaps darken off the hand on the left of the image a little so it doesn't draw attention away from your face.

    A lovely gentle portrait.

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  • Catherine Baker Edited 4 years ago

    Lovely lighting effect even though it was dark and I love the patterns made by the shadow.

    Lovely lighting effect even though it was dark and I love the patterns made by the shadow.

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  • Paul Hoffman Edited 4 years ago

    I think this is a fine photograph. There are technical elements I would have slightly modified, but that's not the point. The best images permit the viewer room for… more

    I think this is a fine photograph. There are technical elements I would have slightly modified, but that's not the point. The best images permit the viewer room for interpretation...perhaps even speculation. And here I see pensiveness, contemplation, wistfulness, the revisiting to a poignant moment--perhaps all of the above or none of the above. But it is compelling enough to stop and wonder. And perhaps even empathize as we make our best guess. If you intended the viewer to pause and reflect on your expression and pose, I think you succeeded admirably. Well done.

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  • Karla Matulina Edited 4 years ago

    I think this is lovely, the tone is beautiful and I like the texture of whatever it is you used to shoot through! Also, I love your pose and expression. Well done!

    I think this is lovely, the tone is beautiful and I like the texture of whatever it is you used to shoot through! Also, I love your pose and expression. Well done!

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Canon EOS 77D / EOS 9000D Tamron 18-400mm f/3.5-6.3
1/4 f/5 6400 18

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