“ The Heart ”
The walls begin to breathe
Like a rib cage
In and out and in and out
And I am afraid, frantic even at first
Watching them close in but then
clocking them as an ebb and flow
counterparts
and thinking if the walls are a rib cage,
I am the heart.
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This photo qualifies for the "Extra Challenge": 4+ Lines
  • Ashley Watts Edited 4 years ago

    The simplicity and grain really appeals to me. It would certainly be in my top 3 of this week's images. I love it... well done!!

    The simplicity and grain really appeals to me. It would certainly be in my top 3 of this week's images. I love it... well done!!

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  • Dag Mar Edited 4 years ago

    I like the concep and the lines work nicely. I like how the one white line is shown on the hand. Maybe you could consider to get the hand a little bit more sharp. This… more

    I like the concep and the lines work nicely. I like how the one white line is shown on the hand. Maybe you could consider to get the hand a little bit more sharp. This would make it more eyecatching.

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Canon EOS 5D Mark II
1/50 f/6.3 800 32

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#leadinglines #grain #poetry #hands

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