“ Gateway ”
We sit here staring silence into each other’s eyes but somehow saying everything. It’s like a gateway to the meat of the issue. Without rigid words in the way to trudge through, trip on, assign different meaning to. We are speaking a language ancient as the love I think we feel or have felt or ...
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  • Ashley Watts Edited 4 years ago

    Such a striking image. The DoF really works well with this... well done Colleen!

    Such a striking image. The DoF really works well with this... well done Colleen!

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  • Carolina Bastos Edited 4 years ago

    Beautiful eye and great focus on it, I like your framing and crop!

    Beautiful eye and great focus on it, I like your framing and crop!

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  • Bob Jameson Edited 4 years ago

    Beautiful as always Colleen. Your eye is so sharp and the color jumps leaps out at you. Knocked it out of the park like you always do. And your eye certainly speaks… more

    Beautiful as always Colleen. Your eye is so sharp and the color jumps leaps out at you. Knocked it out of the park like you always do. And your eye certainly speaks without saying a word.

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  • Steve Allingham Edited 4 years ago

    Ooooo - beautiful eyes, Colleen!

    Do you mind if I share a couple of critiques? If the answer is yes, you mind, then stop reading here! ?
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    Ooooo - beautiful eyes, Colleen!

    Do you mind if I share a couple of critiques? If the answer is yes, you mind, then stop reading here! ?

    According to my Photoshop histogram, the contrast could use a little bump. Not much - just a little.

    And I think it would be a little more dynamic if you cropped in closer - not off the top, but off the right side, and the bottom. That would really force attention to your eye.

    Lastly, I don't believe your hair is that shade of cyan... ? To get the eye color to pop you added blue or cyan to your image, but another way would be to create an adjustment layer for just your iris, leaving the rest of the image alone. Just a thought.

    Regardless, I think it's a beautiful photo of a beautiful woman. Nice job!

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Canon EOS 5D Mark II
1/800 f/2 400 85

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#singlefocalpoint #eye #losangeles #closeup #poetry #selfportrait

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