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Mary Kefayati Unfollow
“ Rule of Thirds ”
I like the sunlight on him and the clouds in the sky
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  • Eric West Edited 7 months ago

    Nicely composed Mary.  Here is a case where the subject is about to exit the frame. That lends to the ephemeral quality of the moment captured.
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    Nicely composed Mary.  Here is a case where the subject is about to exit the frame. That lends to the ephemeral quality of the moment captured.

    Nits:  consider removing the tiny boat from the center. Also balancing shadows, vibrance and texture to the foreground and gain more depth/separation with respect to the background. 

    Bottom line - well done :)

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  • Carol Tomlinson Edited 7 months ago

    I'm glad you included all his shadow in the shot. Lovely light on your paddler.

    I'm glad you included all his shadow in the shot. Lovely light on your paddler.

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  • Debra Jones Edited 7 months ago

    Nice capture, love the colors. Perfect rule of thirds.

    Nice capture, love the colors. Perfect rule of thirds.

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  • Lisa M Edited 7 months ago

    Perfect lighting  here! And I like the strong horizontal lines in the wake from his paddle board to the shoreline to the clouds. Well seen and taken.

    Perfect lighting  here! And I like the strong horizontal lines in the wake from his paddle board to the shoreline to the clouds. Well seen and taken.

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