“ Determination ”
My little granddaughter managed to swing from one hanging bar to another on the playground today. She's watched her older sister do it for a while now, and was so proud when she got all the way across herself. She doesn't make it every time, and in this photo she almost didn't. Her face shows ...
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  • Gerard Admiraal Edited 3 years ago

    Very good to see the emotion of your granddaughter "will I make it or not?". Well portrayed Claudette !

    Very good to see the emotion of your granddaughter "will I make it or not?". Well portrayed Claudette !

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  • Edward Braun Edited 3 years ago

    Very nicely framed and shot. Her eyes and facial expression show the anxiety but one can also make out the grit and determination of the next move to come.  I… more

    Very nicely framed and shot. Her eyes and facial expression show the anxiety but one can also make out the grit and determination of the next move to come.  I admire your ability to have such facial sharpness and wish I knew more about how to accomplish this. My only real criticism in my opinion is the inclusion of the 4 right hand fingers over the bar - they are in the foreground and somehow my eye keeps drifting up to them and I find this distracting.  Great photo and I now see the camera was the iPhone and I am impressed.

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  • Cheryl Feight Edited 3 years ago

    Very nicely framed and terrific expression capture. Good focus on those gorgeous eyes

    Very nicely framed and terrific expression capture. Good focus on those gorgeous eyes

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