“ When loss fills the frame ”
A high concept experiment where I knew what I wanted & failed to achieve it. I was at a funeral on Friday. Ed was 92, active till the last & a wonderful man, a force for decades in our state poetry society. We've lost a lot of longtime members lately & I'm old. Funerals leave me feeling an ever ...
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Photo Location: Williamsburg, VA
  • Derek Kannemeyer Edited 5 months ago

    This one was closer to my original concept. Maybe I just got tired of looking at them all—but I also got too noisy trying to nail one down.

    This one was closer to my original concept. Maybe I just got tired of looking at them all—but I also got too noisy trying to nail one down.

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  • Derek Kannemeyer Edited 5 months ago

    This cropped version no doubt fits the challenge better, and also has some context clues. It may even be a stronger image. But to me it's less suffused with feeling. I… more

    This cropped version no doubt fits the challenge better, and also has some context clues. It may even be a stronger image. But to me it's less suffused with feeling. I wanted those fall colors to fill the frame.

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  • Carolyn Solomon Edited 4 months ago

    The figures are sombre and I like that you kept the autumn colours, as you felt it was also a celebration of your friend's long life, well lived. The blackness is very… more

    The figures are sombre and I like that you kept the autumn colours, as you felt it was also a celebration of your friend's long life, well lived. The blackness is very apt for all the terrible things happening right now in so many places. What a depressing time we live in.

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  • Debby McCaskey Lynch Edited 5 months ago

    I'm sorry for your loss Derek. … more

    I'm sorry for your loss Derek. 
    Perhaps it would have felt more like mourning if you had used more subdued colors? Before I read your story I thought this was at a concert.

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