“ Crying ”
I thought a photo with her laying on her back with her arms and legs in the air would make a fun photo. She did not.
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  • Claudette Kohut Edited 3 years ago

    I like the minimal colour. Between the sand, the stones and her outfit, it's almost… more

    I like the minimal colour. Between the sand, the stones and her outfit, it's almost monochromatic.

    On the other hand, since she is your focal point, she is almost lost in between the river the stone. Perhaps having a buddha pose in front of the stone? Or taking it from the other direction?

    Your horizon line is in the centre, but with so much of interest in the sky and in the foreground it works well, I like the brush on either side of the girl as well, it frames her well. Very kind of her to pose - or at least to try!

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  • Carol Tomlinson Edited 3 years ago

    I like the way you have got her body mimicking the shape of the bridge behind.

    I like the way you have got her body mimicking the shape of the bridge behind.

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Canon EOS RP Canon RF 35mm f/1.8 macro
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