“ Red or White? ”
One of the many drink options at my grandson's engagement party.
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Photo Location: Efrat, Israel
  • Mark Smith Edited 5 years ago

    OK. Nobody's commented on this yet and I think it is a really cute idea with some nice color, balanced composition, and interesting geometry. I like the use of the… more

    OK. Nobody's commented on this yet and I think it is a really cute idea with some nice color, balanced composition, and interesting geometry. I like the use of the depth of field where the first glass is slightly soft, the next glasses and bottles are tack sharp, and then the focus fades to where the last glasses are a pretty soft. The balance on the pink and white bottles with gold foil combined with a nice, neutral background is nice and all of the highlights on the glasses are nice.

    My only real critique is that you crowded the image a little. The tops of the bottles are cut off and if you had moved the bottles in from the side just a little it would have put both bottles right on the 1/3 lines. I can see why you probably didn't leave more room because it looks like there are some yellow glasses to the right that you were trying to avoid, but I really wish the tops of the bottles were there.

    I like the concept and I think it was probably pretty well executed withing the constraints that you were working under. As I said, I can't believe nobody else has commented on this yet because the composition overall is rather good.

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