“ Thank you for not smoking ”
This is my street photography redo. Loving the two people smoking next to a "thank you for not smoking" sign and how the man in the back is in the shadows. Critiques welcome!
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  • Derrick Griffiths-Davies Edited 2 years ago

    Nice image Sitora. It's a shame the sign is partially in the shadows as it makes it hard to read. But I like the rebellious nature of the image.

    Nice image Sitora. It's a shame the sign is partially in the shadows as it makes it hard to read. But I like the rebellious nature of the image.

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  • Michel Fiocchi Edited 2 years ago

    As Ron, I like the street photography but it's very difficult for me to go to the peoples....
    I would try a square crop to get a stronger impact to this shot… more

    As Ron, I like the street photography but it's very difficult for me to go to the peoples....
    I would try a square crop to get a stronger impact to this shot
    see you on our mini-group

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  • Ron Seese Edited 2 years ago

    I commend you on taking on a redo of street photography, my absolute fear. My critique would be that your image might be stronger with a crop. But what do I know LOL.

    I commend you on taking on a redo of street photography, my absolute fear. My critique would be that your image might be stronger with a crop. But what do I know LOL.

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  • Michaela Coelho Edited 2 years ago

    Street photography is tough. Trying to get that telling shot in a split second. I really like this concept and the figures against a plain background work. However if… more

    Street photography is tough. Trying to get that telling shot in a split second. I really like this concept and the figures against a plain background work. However if the sign is such an integral part of the story it should be more easily identifiable. Maybe changing point of view, or raising the shadows in post processing would assist. Happy Framing

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