“ Imperfection ”
As a begginer, I always fell my composition to be lacking. This is a shot I want to save for a later date, to see how my technique progresses with the challenges..
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  • Deano K Edited 2 years ago

    Great awareness (and honesty!) Rachel. The location/subject is super interesting and yeah while this composition is not bad at all, I'm sure there may be others that… more

    Great awareness (and honesty!) Rachel. The location/subject is super interesting and yeah while this composition is not bad at all, I'm sure there may be others that simplify the frame and make even more of those lines and shadows. Good luck!

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  • Yolandi Knoesen Edited 2 years ago

    Love this nice work. I like how the eye travels around this picture. So many lovely lines.

    Love this nice work. I like how the eye travels around this picture. So many lovely lines.

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  • Penny Hutton Edited 2 years ago

    The use of light and shadows works really well with this image and helps pick out the curve of the stairs.  It would be interesting to see this at different times… more

    The use of light and shadows works really well with this image and helps pick out the curve of the stairs.  It would be interesting to see this at different times of day.

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  • Karen Robinson Edited 2 years ago

    I really like the patterns that are created with the shadows, the curve of the front platform really draws your eye towards the shadows, I like it alot!

    I really like the patterns that are created with the shadows, the curve of the front platform really draws your eye towards the shadows, I like it alot!

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Fujifilm X-T30 Fujifilm 18-55mm f/2.8-4
1/500 f/8 100 55

Tags

#blackandwhite #stairs #lines #shadows #geometry #imperfection #Fujifilm

Genre/Technique

Architecture

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