“ Violin notes ”
Some old violin notes from a flea market... was playing around with my vintage Pentacon lens ( adapted to the camera with K&F Concept adapter M42-M4/3)
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  • Berni Ann Edited 2 years ago

    Interesting composition.

    I'd like to see more detail and color in the flowers but I'm guessing you were going for… more

    Interesting composition.

    I'd like to see more detail and color in the flowers but I'm guessing you were going for nostalgia.

    Good representation of the challenge theme.

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  • Gordon Oliver Edited 2 years ago

    I love the concept of putting the dead flowers with the musical score - there is something quite poignant and melancholy about it. Also, well done for experimenting with… more

    I love the concept of putting the dead flowers with the musical score - there is something quite poignant and melancholy about it. Also, well done for experimenting with vintage lenses - they are a lot of fun and can give some unique looks.

    I would maybe have tried a slightly smaller aperture to get more of the flowers in focus and also have a sheet of white paper between you and the subject to reflect a little light and just fill in the shadows a little., but that's just minor stuff. It's a great shot!

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Olympus PEN F
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