“ Partly Vacant ”
Poem:
The levels below
Grow tighter each day.
More darkness is found
And more shadows stay.
One can barely breathe
Or get any sleep.
There must be light higher up
To avoid getting buried deep.

Photo Description:
I used the step ladder at my ...
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  • brigitte_bric Edited a year ago

    Nice perspective. The imbalance doesn't bother me and fits somehow with the caption which seems to be dark and scary as far as I understand it  (not English mother… more

    Nice perspective. The imbalance doesn't bother me and fits somehow with the caption which seems to be dark and scary as far as I understand it  (not English mother language). Both give the picture a dark and broken vibe similar to the Dutch angle. I not sure if it was your intention but this is what I think/feel.

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  • t.rubblemaker Edited a year ago

    There's a sense of imbalance here, things are not quite straight but have a subtle curve to them. Not quite fisheye lens curved, but quieter than that. Having the image… more

    There's a sense of imbalance here, things are not quite straight but have a subtle curve to them. Not quite fisheye lens curved, but quieter than that. Having the image brighter at the top to darker shadows at the bottom helps with the feeling of vertigo. The bottom is so far away! Don't fall!
    P.S. welcome aboard! Did you use these paints in that edit you posted on my photo?

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  • Cindy Jo Csomo Edited a year ago

    Very moody leveret-scribble, I like the black and white. Welcome to 52 Frames. ? ?

    Very moody leveret-scribble, I like the black and white. Welcome to 52 Frames. ? ?

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Tags

#shootfromabove #shelves #repetition #wideangle

Genre/Technique

HDR Shot with a Phone Black & White Still Life

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