“ mind your head ”
Leading Lines... My aim was to use leading lines to draw attention to the subject. The fence line in the image leads the viewer's attention to the tunnel "mind your head", but before that the man and boy break the fence line, breaking the leading line, drawing the attention to them the subject...
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  • Ralph Nitschke Edited 5 years ago

    I love the timelessness of the image.

    I love the timelessness of the image.

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  • Aleksandar Markovic Edited 5 years ago

    I love the vibe. And the moment you caught is nice. I agree with Robyn though, I'd have cropped out the left part.

    I love the vibe. And the moment you caught is nice. I agree with Robyn though, I'd have cropped out the left part.

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  • Robyn Goodall Edited 5 years ago

    Great shot! I would actually crop the whole left side of the image out (building, tree, fence, light poles) ... I find it distracting and the image would be stronger… more

    Great shot! I would actually crop the whole left side of the image out (building, tree, fence, light poles) ... I find it distracting and the image would be stronger without it all. I see a dad stopping to send a message and a kid waiting patiently for him to return to the present. The tunnel is a cool element

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  • Bee Cooler Edited 5 years ago

    Nice picture. I see what you were saying, but i think we miss seeing the people because their colours blend-in to the fence (the people need to be brighter). Also the… more

    Nice picture. I see what you were saying, but i think we miss seeing the people because their colours blend-in to the fence (the people need to be brighter). Also the leading line continues and we're drawn to the tunnel. Good job finding leading lines though ?

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