“ The Wind Whistles Here ”
I took many photos for this challenge, everything from buildings in construction, materials not yet used, people engaged in a daily task, white cherry blossoms that have yet to turn pink, my pilgrimage in Japan...

This submission, I think, works on multiple levels but more importantly ...
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Photo Location: Kitagawa, Japan
  • Michael Ostrolenk Edited a month ago

    I'm really enjoying the documentary style of shots you're producing, a glimpse in to life that you have a good eye for. I only ever see clothes on a washing line in a… more

    I'm really enjoying the documentary style of shots you're producing, a glimpse in to life that you have a good eye for. I only ever see clothes on a washing line in a garden or a yard so this is such an interesting image of that normal day to day task but in a derelict warehouse - the colours stand out nicely against the darker, run down background.

    It'd have loved to see it from a more side on positioning with some symmetry on the clothes but that girder would have crashed the image and i think you'd also have lost some depth...so maybe not.

    Well done Gabriel!

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  • Eileen Wadie Edited a month ago

    Wonderful composition and a powerful image to go with your narrative.

    Wonderful composition and a powerful image to go with your narrative.

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  • Justin K Edited a month ago

    Well composed. I like the colours and shadows

    Well composed. I like the colours and shadows

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  • John Lee Edited a month ago

    Great image for this theme, Gabriel! It grabs your attention and imagination by sparking many questions: Whose clothes are these? Why are they in this building?

    Great image for this theme, Gabriel! It grabs your attention and imagination by sparking many questions: Whose clothes are these? Why are they in this building?

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Panasonic S9 Panasonic S 18-40mm F4.5-6.3 Lens
1/1000 f/6.3 640 36

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#unfinished #tentwentyeight #shikoku #japan #life

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