“ Broken Treasure ”
This ship is over a hundred years old and has been handed down, in my family, for many generations. When my grandfather was a little boy, he would sit at the table for hours and watch his grandfather whittle this ship from wood. When my grandfather got older, his grandfather gave it to him...
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  • Danielle Reiff Edited 5 years ago

    That story is great! I wonder how you could've shown more of the age or wood texture in your photo (as those seemed like important elements of the story).

    That story is great! I wonder how you could've shown more of the age or wood texture in your photo (as those seemed like important elements of the story).

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  • Jacci Mace Edited 5 years ago

    I like your POV, I think the lighting reminds me of an antique map. I think I would have brought up the shadows just a bit to reveal more detail in the ship.

    I like your POV, I think the lighting reminds me of an antique map. I think I would have brought up the shadows just a bit to reveal more detail in the ship.

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  • Shelle Wood Edited 5 years ago

    Fantastic story! I like your composition and low lighting. If you want more details to show then I agree with upping the exposure just a bit.

    Fantastic story! I like your composition and low lighting. If you want more details to show then I agree with upping the exposure just a bit.

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  • Kathy Desruisseau Edited 5 years ago

    I love your story! I agree with Molly that it could be a bit brighter so we can see more detail.

    I love your story! I agree with Molly that it could be a bit brighter so we can see more detail.

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