“ Man hair ”
Every week I say to myself that I'll branch out and find new photo subjects, and every week I end up taking photos of my boyfriend, because it's the most convenient. At least this week the topic have me an excuse :) I caught him in a natural position, and wanted to focus in on his hair, one of ...
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Photo Location: Washington, DC
  • Danna Gutman Edited 4 years ago

    Hey, at least your default subject is your boyfriend and not your dog... ? Love how you included his hand - really adds to the composition. This is a tiny bit close… more

    Hey, at least your default subject is your boyfriend and not your dog... ? Love how you included his hand - really adds to the composition. This is a tiny bit close for comfort but I realize that's what you were going for! Great capture.

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  • Agnes Sonnemans Edited 4 years ago

    I love the light in this one and real good the capture of the hair

    I love the light in this one and real good the capture of the hair

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  • Kimberley Protzman Edited 4 years ago

    You've caught the texture of his hair really well, Yael!  I feel like I can reach out and touch it.  I might have focused more sharply on his chin than on his… more

    You've caught the texture of his hair really well, Yael!  I feel like I can reach out and touch it.  I might have focused more sharply on his chin than on his moustache,  since that's a spot in the frame where the eye is likely to land first.  Also, his hand in there is a bit of a distraction, and doesn't seem to serve a purpose.  I do like the close up, more abstract shot--in spite of my small complaints, I think it's a great photo!

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  • Mathew @ Distilled Images Edited 4 years ago

    I really like the way the close-up turns him into an abstraction of a man. I do wish the crop had been tighter; the green wall and brown furniture in the corner do not… more

    I really like the way the close-up turns him into an abstraction of a man. I do wish the crop had been tighter; the green wall and brown furniture in the corner do not add anything to the story. A really tight crop that was ALL him would have improved this image for me. Great way to "see" the world through the eyes of a photographer.

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