“ Breadsticks ”
I have been collecting out-dated food products to keep in the classroom for students to explore with product photography. I was experimenting quickly for this week's challenge. I am not happy with the glare on the left side of the box or the slight distortion from the lens here. If this is ...
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  • Dale Creyghton Edited 3 months ago

    Great idea having expired food to work with, love the colours and composition here. As you say that glare is a bit distracting, and the wrinkles on your backdrop as… more

    Great idea having expired food to work with, love the colours and composition here. As you say that glare is a bit distracting, and the wrinkles on your backdrop as well. Love the texture of that red wool against the smooth bread sticks, ka pai to mahi.

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  • Danielle Rodgers Edited 3 months ago

    I like that you pulled the color red from the packaging into the string that you've tied around the breadsticks. … more

    I like that you pulled the color red from the packaging into the string that you've tied around the breadsticks. 
    Food photography isn't my strong suit, so I don't always know how to offer shreds on a challenge like this... but maybe my one suggestion would be: a little editing in post to tidy up / remove some of the pieces of lint on the backdrop.

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Shred away! I feel no pain.
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1/30 f/1.8 320 4.69

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