“ Reading a Book ”
I put my camera on a tripod and connected it to my phone so could fire it. I wanted to change the focus and make sure I was in the right spot.
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Photo Location: Oak Park, IL
This photo qualifies for the "Extra Challenge": Tell a Story
  • Rob Horner Edited 5 years ago

    I feel that focusing on the book and being a bit closer would draw the eye and make the viewer feel like it's their own POV. Nice idea.

    I feel that focusing on the book and being a bit closer would draw the eye and make the viewer feel like it's their own POV. Nice idea.

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  • Kathryn Watson Edited 5 years ago

    I like your idea here...if I may, I would rather you had focused more of the composition on the book, and less of the back of your head and back...just cropping it in… more

    I like your idea here...if I may, I would rather you had focused more of the composition on the book, and less of the back of your head and back...just cropping it in significantly would still show the intent of the composition, but I think would be more interesting. And perhaps a clear focus on the book with you blurred? A great idea, and I love that you did the remote firing of the shutter with your phone! I've not ever tried this!

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#book #shoulder #person #read #reading

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