“ Lone Feather ”
My kids and I went to Indian Echo Caverns (Hershey, PA) where they have caves and a barn yard area. In the barn yard area, they have two peacocks, one of which is white. My kids found a feather on the ground of the peacock inclosure and brought it home. It now sits in a silver vase in our main ...
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  • Marci Minear Edited 2 years ago

    Love the lighting!  Absolutely stunning!

    Love the lighting!  Absolutely stunning!

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  • Linda Miller Edited 2 years ago

    Very pretty and artistic. I love the detail and texture.

    Very pretty and artistic. I love the detail and texture.

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  • heyvickig Edited 2 years ago

    I really like the lights and darks and the simplicity of your image. You have gotten some good input from Chris and Karen about centering the vase and feather for a… more

    I really like the lights and darks and the simplicity of your image. You have gotten some good input from Chris and Karen about centering the vase and feather for a stronger composition.

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  • Chris Stone Edited 2 years ago

    ...and you found a good use for it this week--well done! Here's a suggestion since you're open to critical feedback. When you are relying on geometric symmetry as a… more

    ...and you found a good use for it this week--well done! Here's a suggestion since you're open to critical feedback. When you are relying on geometric symmetry as a compositional tool (as I think you were here), you really have to nail it to be effective. Your vase and feather are a little out of center, and a little crooked (tilting to camera left). These are easy fixes, and would really make a stronger presentation, I think.

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