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Corinne Srsen Unfollow
“ Wind Dance ”
This was taken, building on what I learned last week, and incorporating the slower shutter speed to capture the movement of the butterfly as she is unfolding her wings.
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Photo Location: Olympia, Washington
  • Ben Meikle Edited 5 years ago

    Great pose, concept and colours. The light and building on the right in the background draw the eye away from your subject, just rotating the view a bit to have them out… more

    Great pose, concept and colours. The light and building on the right in the background draw the eye away from your subject, just rotating the view a bit to have them out of shot may have increased the focus on the butterfly. Brightening the image overall as well.

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  • Danielle Marquardt Edited 5 years ago

    This is beautiful, you did a wonderful job with this. Word to the wise, if you decide to print it out, make sure you increase the exposure/brightness. I have a similar… more

    This is beautiful, you did a wonderful job with this. Word to the wise, if you decide to print it out, make sure you increase the exposure/brightness. I have a similar style photo and I needed to reprint 3x until I had it right. It was just too dark. And quite honestly, I could even increased it a bit more.

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  • Steve Allingham Edited 5 years ago

    Love the saturated colors in your image, Corinne!
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    Love the saturated colors in your image, Corinne!

    I think a little bit more light on your subject would help her (and the beautiful butterfly wings) stand out from the dark background. A small off-camera flash located to your right would help - not too much, you just want to brighten the subject, not wash it out.

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  • Erin Bradley Edited 5 years ago

    Gorgeous rich colours in this image Corinne! Great to see you using your skills to good effect ?

    Gorgeous rich colours in this image Corinne! Great to see you using your skills to good effect ?

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#dance #butterfly #bluehour #slowshutter #night

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